Writing task 2 band 8.0 - 8.5 : Developments in technology (By Thuy Phuong)

Developments in technology has brought various environmental problems. Some believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve environmental problems. Others, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is true that technology advancement has triggered a variety of environmental issues. While I accept that these problems can be partially addressed by a simplistic life, I would argue that technological progress can help curb environmental degradation more substantially.  

On the one hand, there are some reasons why people lead a simpler life can solve environmental problems. The first reason is that when individuals choose reusable products with minimal packaging rather than disposable ones, large quantities of household waste can be reduced. Therefore, people’s living areas will become more environmentally friendly. The second reason is that when people take public  transportation rather than driving, significant levels of exhaust fumes from private vehicles released into the air can be saved.  This then leads to a considerable elimination in  carbon dioxide emission that is  a major contributor to the greenhouse effect and global warming.  

On the other hand, I believe that technological advances can better tackle environmental problems. Firstly, thanks to the improvements in technology, various household products such as refrigerators, washing machines and cooking  appliances are designed to meet minimum energy efficiency standards. As a result, while customers can cut down the energy consumption of their products, a country can avoid the pending energy crisis.  Secondly, it is technology that enables countries to utilize alternative sources of energy such as solar and wind power so that they can reduce their dependence on traditional energy resources. For example, India has employed its advanced technology to build up photovoltaic solar power which harnesses the suns energy to produce electricity without causing any damage to the environment.  

In conclusion, it seems to me that technological advancements can better address environmental problems.  

(278 words – Thuy Phuong) 

Source: ielts-thuyphuong.com