Some students prefer to take a year off between school and university, to work or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that many high school graduates are interested in taking a gap year before entering universities. While I accept that there are some drawbacks of this trend, I believe that the advantages of taking a gap year are overwhelming. 

On the one hand, several disadvantages can be anticipated when students take a year off after high school. Firstly, the deferral of one year can make students a year behind their peers. While their friends continue education, those who have a year off might be responsible for a longer education process. Secondly, a year off to travel can be considered to be a waste of money since teenagers may have to pay for accommodation and transportation fees. These expenses might be better spared to attend university or college. 

On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for students to take a year out for a variety of reasons. The first reason is that taking a year off to work is a great opportunity for students to gain real work experience and learn new valuable skills before they pursue their tertiary studies. This kind of employment experience can allow gap year students to identify universities that most fit their personalities and career ambitions, making them better prepared for their chosen universities and their post-university professions. Secondly, a year off to travel might allow high school leavers to explore new lands and interact with new people. As a result, they can have a better understanding of various cultures and broaden their social contacts. 

In conclusion, it seems to me that the benefits of spending one year off before commencing studies are more significant than the drawbacks. 

(278 words – Thuy Phuong) 
Source: ielts-thuyphuong.com

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